Wow. This story was so long and so cool, I wish I had my own edible kingdom.
I really like how you threatened the king and queen with tickling. But I did think maybe next time you should try splitting it up into paragraphs so its not one big chunk. But overall i really liked your story, good job piata keep up the good work!
Good work I like how you said the warnings of turkey
good work piata i like this presentation
Wow. This story was so long and so cool, I wish I had my own edible kingdom.
I really like how you threatened the king and queen with tickling. But I did think maybe next time you should try splitting it up into paragraphs so its not one big chunk. But overall i really liked your story, good job piata keep up the good work!